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I've made a little progress. I'm around the middle of the story, at least? Goddamn I'm slow. Partially because of weird things with work at the moment, but even if I use that as an excuse I feel like I'm way to slow at this.

I think I might be being a bit too...thorough with my name? Everyone I've showed it to has shown some measure of surprise at how 'detailed' it is (which is a bad translation since it's not detailed at all, but I mean...detailed as compared to stick figures which a lot of names tend to be). It's really hard for me not to treat this as a rough--I guess I kinda don't trust myself enough to just draw the layout out and know what I'm doing when I'm actually doing the real roughs. That would be all well and good if I were just faster though...well, it's something to think about.

Need to work on angles. Which means I need to continue working on improving how I draw bodies. But...at least it's coming along?


























I told myself that my next short comic would be something I haven't rushed and something I'm proud of. Can't let myself down.

Date: 2010-08-06 07:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dusky-rue.livejournal.com
I really like these! I, uh, can't read Japanese, so I don't know what the characters are saying/exactly what's going on but I DO like how expressive they are!

I especially like the girl's face. She's adorable. <3

Some of those angles and wide shots look pretty good. Sketchy, but the reader gets a sense of what's going on and where the characters are and that's what's important.

Don't worry about being faster. I've found that stressing about how much time it takes only makes it go slower. :\ Speed will come with time/practice and everyone has their own pace.

Anyway! <3 <3 <3

Date: 2010-08-07 01:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] banditess.livejournal.com
dashing fellow is so very dashing ♥♥

Date: 2010-08-08 02:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] goatbit.livejournal.com
Oh! I like the last page! Cool earring transformation!

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